"Communication skills are an essential component in the education of engineering students to facilitate not just students' education but also to prepare them for their future careers".
According to Marc Riemer, Faculty of Engineering Monash University (2007) In engineering students' education, communication skills are a key element as it aids students' education and nurture students for future career aspects.
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ReplyDeletePros:
1. It was short, sweet at straight to the point
2. It captured what Marc Riemer said
Improvements:
1. When paraphrasing, it is good to also change some of the words in the paragraph.
- for example: "Future career" could be changed to "future jobs" or "coming professions" :)